Thursday, November 18, 2010

American Cancer Society

INSTRUCTOR EVALUATION FORM:  PERSUASIVE SPEECH

Name:_Sara Kirchner_______________                        Topic:__American Cancer Society__


Persuasive Speech Sections:
Points:
INTRODUCTION (35 PTS.)
Gained attention
Introduced topic clearly
Relevance statement clear and applied to audience
Credibility clear and understandable
Aroused interest in the topic
Introduced topic/thesis statement clearly                                                                                            
This section I felt that I did well with as I worked on this for a long while trying to come up with the best way to get the attention of the audience and keep it.
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BODY (55 PTS.)
Main points clear
Strong evidence & supporting material
Organization effective
Argument development effective
Benefits of plan related to audience
Plan clearly explained
All 4 Transitions effective; review and preview
Sources are well integrated, credible, & cited fully
This section I was confident with as I had participated in the program in the past and had a lot of knowledge of the society.
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CONCLUSTION (30 PTS.)
Audience prepared for conclusion
Review statement clear and concise
Memorable close was solid and clear-call for action
I had missed points on this in the past speeches and was working to correct that area a lot so I was confident that I could get all the points this time with the closing that I worked on.
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DELIVERY (80 PTS.)
Solid eye contact was use throughout the presentation
Uses voice effectively (rate, volume,  no vocalized pauses)
Extemporaneous and conversational
Uses non-verbals effectively (posture, movement, hand gestures)
Shows enthusiasm for topic
Interesting and Exciting
Appears confident & in control
Handles note cards discreetly
Shows energy and interest in presenting
Engaging for the audience
Meets time requirements
I thought that I had a better score than the 8 in the Voice section and it was noted with the “um’s” again and I had worked on not using that so I think that I may have had pauses as I caught myself with the “um’s” I was trying to count them as I went to avoid them.
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TOTAL POINTS POSSIBLE:  200
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